Anyone can do it. I'm doing it.
Just reread chapter 2 and look for spelling and punctuation and grammar errors and anything else that might be an error before I spend thousands of dollars printing it.
Chapter 2 starts here:
[link]This is for anybody who has a minute over the next day or two.
grrrrr last year the process of going to print was pretty simple but this year the person who is my service representative for this printer is incredibly annoying! I am very angry and stressed!
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'Lay here' should be 'lie here' and 'lay there' should be 'lie there'
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...and everything else that Superficial-Flummox and Jazeki have already discussed.
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I wonder how the confusion between lay and lie began. I'd imagine because some accents pronounce "lay" as they would "lie"? I've heard it said "I will lie here", but I've not read it "lie here". I don't think, anyway.
This may or may not be something. "Three hours until the sunrise" maybe "until the sun rises"? or "until sunrise"? All three are correct, though, but I'd think "until the sunrise" is more awkward (might just be me though).
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"from the deeps where she lives" should probably be "from the depths"
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"someone called sick" should probably (unless Anya talks funny. which he might, since he then says "I stayed extra") "someone called IN sick"
AAAND that's all I found.
However I talk awful English with my mouth, so me and Anya would be good ol' English language bastardizing pals.