Toilet Genie Ch1 Cover

Chapter cover for my webcomic, Toilet Genie
Painting with no cover stuff can be seen here
decorative bars on front and back by

UPDATE: I altered a few things after suggestions. :3

Looking for critiques on mainly the design aspects. Critiques on the painting itself, not so much, since I can't change it.

I kind of like this. But I'm not convinced I like it. o__o But I do?

^^ Progress on getting TG ready for print is coming along. Did a second test printing today after yet more color fudgery, trying to get saturation and contrast to look right on gloss paper. First 7 pages are ready, and now that I have a method, the rest will be easier.

I'm debating on getting an ISBN and barcode for TG. I dont see shop distribution as being a big opportunity ... but I will probably do it because I'm going all out. O__O After producing a metric ass ton of lame mini comics on photocopy paper, THIS HERE IS SERIOUS BUSINESS. I WANTY IT ALL, WITH THE CHERRY ON TOP. DUN CARE IF I SPEND MORE THAN I MAKE.

oAo

This is the first time I've ever used the critique feature! 8D