When I am finally done with the redrawing, and the rest of chapter 2... this damn chapter had better be worth it. > I COULD BE DRAWING PORN, BUT I AM DRAWING THIS. WHY?
Sorry, bad mood. How about I distract myself by eating cheese? Yes. >_> ........... mf.
TWC: 10 minute sketch of cover art idea for chapter 2. Skittlez, with Birdu [V: STOP MAKING FUN OF ME] leaning over her. She lays on a wall [that will have Victorian decor on it.] Below the wall is the pool at which Vidu and the wolf meet.
. . .wow. Again with the awesome! This page is so dynamic and well paced. The flow of the "now" and the "legend" parts are really well done, and sets up the whole back and forth thing really really well. Your stuffs are so lovely. minor note: I really adore skittelz little foot in the 2nd to last panel. It's cute
This page looks so magnificent! It is very dynamic, with all the slanted panels. Also the digital/ traditional warm/cool contrast is really effective for separating the two stories, plus it just looks damn awesome. The layout is also very suspenseful, and it makes me wonder what happens next, even though I kinda know, from reading. I can't wait for you to print chapter two so I can read it in its beautiful, non-virtual entirety, and understand it better.
Ohh, that's an absolutely gorgeous composition~! It really improves the flow of the narration and creates a curious mood... If I were a new reader, I would be interested to see how the two stories connected~
This is amazing. I love how you've reorganized everything. I think the flow is much improved and is a good way to link what is happening in both stories. Great job and good luck with the rest of the redrawing!
minor note: I really adore skittelz little foot in the 2nd to last panel. It's cute