AWWWWW. That little dog is adorable in the ugly-but-so-cute-somehow-I-just-want-to-take-it-home way ♥

I'm curious to see what this comic's like.. I found ASPS, and I didn't get to reading it before it disappeared ;__;

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I think the lettering looks good. It's incorporated and it fits the style. Non distracting and readible!

I'm really likin' TG so far and very excited. I also think it's some of the best story telling I've seen from ya. It's clearly set up, the backgrounds are all helping progress the story, the compositions are nice and varied. The fact you're doing so much story telling with the color- wowie wow wow.

I personally would have drawn the stairs in the first panel, to help link up the pages. But it's such a nice up shot on the meanie poo kid- I think it works out.

More more more!

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Awesome work! I am really enjoying this!

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All pugs are cute in that way! XD I didn't care for them until I met ~MonkeysWithGuns and she had a three legged pug named Jade. It was the sweetest, most adorable, oinking dog I'd ever seen. <3

How did you find ASPS, btw? Now that I'm starting a new project, I'm trying to figure out how to publicize it. @_@;;; not that that matters right now. only two pages...

I think Toilet Genie will be much better than ASPS. ^___^ I hope and pray my story telling has improved since previous trial and error failures. T_T

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OMG, "<3?" is perfect. Pugs deserve to be made fun of though. They look so odd it demands it. I really like the coloring of the stones in the final panel.

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The War of Winds, an epic fantasy online comic.

I was definitely thinking that I didn't link the locations well enough from page 1 to page 2. >< But I liked the shot / wanted to finish the page so I went with it. Hopefully page 3 will tie it all together! 8D Page three is a title page / establishing shot. [except the establishing shot comes after the action? Like a rest in music. But probably more confusing than a musical rest and less effective. =____=;]

I'm really glad you think this comic is some of my best work. I agree. >< I haven't had my heart in something for a long long time and I've done so much reading of other amazing comics lately. O_O

aaaah! It's so awesome to have another seqa professional reading my comic ... because you maybe see all the thought / book learning that I'm trying to put to use.

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WTF !? POOR THING !!! XD i_i

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That Dog will destroy him!
Like the comic so far, still a bit early though but it looks very entertaining.

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"Think through a situation in your head before it happens,leave out no details or possibilities".

HEHEHE. D'awww.. yeah, hard to resist a little oinking dog, for sure. I'm not even a lapdog-type fan, but.. it's those squished faces I guess. XD

Hmmm. I thiiiink I found it through another webcomic, possibly Earthsong or Redemption. I didn't get further than 10 or so pages and stopped though ;-; (Man.. this actually had to be much further ago than two years, come to think of it..)

It looks good so far. Don't be *too* hard on yourself. <333

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